Originally posted by MoFo_JoRo
I don't know....it's much more interesting than what most arm-chair football pros lend to a story, more intriguing.
I like how you helped us connect to a player benched due to the ACL injury, and the internal thought process or concerns that go along with that on an intimate basis for the player injured.
Regarding writing about the past vs the present.......the old saying about in order to understand the present, you need to understand the past first....might hold some weight in your writing. In addition, by leaving out the past, would be assuming everyone already knows it. For those learning or getting up to speed, you would be eliminating important elements that lead to the current time for those readers.
I'd read what you wrote in a hot second. I loved it! Best of luck to you!
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