New Song, all feedback appreciated

[Nick7]

Alright, this is the basis for my next song (and last for a while).

At the end of the song, I'm gonna stick a lead in, so I can
finally show my true capabilities. Still no vox, sadly...
anyways, all feedback is appreciated...expect a new version next week.

http://media.putfile.com/*******-Goombas

EDIT: The ******* starts with G and ends with Damn.

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Sorry. I already don't like it, just from the title. *shrugs*

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[Raiderfan76]

^^^ what he said.........

[Dream]

I really liked it and I thought the transitions were really smooth. What tuning were you in man?

[Nick7]

^^^ what he said.........

Okay, well, here's something for you...

Ironically, you have a picture of a half-naked woman in your sig...

[Nick7]

I really liked it and I thought the transitions were really smooth. What tuning were you in man?

It's my 7-string with the B tuned down to an A.
I don't usually tune down, but I figured it was
time to try.

[Raiderfan76]

Half-Naked

Ironically, you have a picture of a half-naked woman in your sig...

Hmmm ok, well what does that have to do with using the Lords name in vain?

[Nick7]

Hmmm ok, well what does that have to do with using the Lords name in vain?

It's funny that a word is inappropriate, but that
is perfectly fine, right? Keeping the boards clean?